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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 April 18
Image: N/A

a dam gifts itself to take tears to a blind spot~ tears will never give ...

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Date: 4/19/2024 5:28:00 AM
a thought-provoking Senyru. The imagery is perfect and subtly powerful. enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 4/19/2024 6:27:00 AM
Oh, a job well done, Sara, spot-on indeed. Aloha, William

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