The Emotion of Your Soul

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Bordner Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 8:58 PM
To have the mystery and love of the one you adore sprinkled vastly upon your smooth shores, to induce emotions pure upon your lover's face, what grace...this poem is romantic in that it celebrates the intangible and natural charm of your Love, the voice, the emotions, the spirit Charma. "Like polar white of early snow, the pure emotion of your soul..." so very heart touching and romantic Charma...J.A.B.
Goswami Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 12:19 PM
Beautiful and lovely creation. Long live the love..Best wishes to you dear scholar...
Callus Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Exquisitely beautiful Charm! What lovely emotions to feel between dusk and dawn! Your mutual love does make you whole. This sure is a clever choice of music! a 7 rating for you. // paul
Mcdaid Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 10:26 AM
outstanding beautifully penned piece charmaine golden pen dear friend excellent flowing ink
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 8:10 AM
I forgot to rate it a 7777 and favourite ( the funny spelling) Many hugs Tim xxxx
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 6:04 AM
A fallen stardust from birth-silk sky scattered upon my moon-kissed shores Like polar-white of early snow Very impressive, these combination words. I liked this. LOVE Charmaine xxxxxxxx rajat
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 4:01 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Charmaine !!! - Love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 10:42 PM
Beauty and brilliance together Charmaine is ur wonderful write my friend! perfectly beautiful!
Sivey Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 10:14 PM
Brilliant work my friend! This is a beautiful and enlightening poem! I loved the line, "Like polar-white of early snow" it was special to me, I just love what snow looks like on the first snow of the season, so very white, crystal white! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous write this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
Smith Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 10:13 PM
How beautiful Charma.... A fallen stardust scattered on your shore...wow...you got me....a fav.....hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 8:40 PM
So wonderfully beautiful Charmaine. You are so blessed to know such a love.
Yvonne Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 8:27 PM
Wonderful Char, "my moon-kissed shores" great imagery throughout.
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