The Emerald Sea of Deep Woe

THE EMERALD SEA OF DEEP WOE. 

  I cradled incredible crying moment
  when you just walked away still I remember.
   I had to surrender without any complain
   sinking in the emerald sea of deep woe.

   You left but I could neither believe nor accept the fact
   that you were going forever.
   How could I forget our so many sweet memories!
    Mercilessly you sailed in spree
   immersing me in turbulent sea of intense sorrow.   

   Tingling passion arose when you came close.
  Romance rolled arousing aroma as if we were never to be apart.
  But territory of love was built in vain, relation coiled.
   Love terminated in inevitable pain. 
   I gurgled trying to swallow the grief.
  That incredible crying moment whirled in vortex of dolor.
  .
  You left piercing heart of oyster.
  Secretion of nectar in drops of refused love
   now forming pearl of agony.
  My saline tears mingled in briny sea of despondence.  

  09/28/19
                     First Place
                    Verses of Metaphors II
    Contest by Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mitra Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 9:33 PM
This is a fantastic creation with words..a gem of a poem.loved it a lot
Dutta Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Thanks n Love
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:19 AM
Big congratulations on your first position win.
Dutta Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Thanks n Regards
Gauthier Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 8:40 PM
Congrats on your top win, Anisha.
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October 8, 2018 at 12:58 AM
Thanks Line. Love
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