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The Emerald Sea of Deep Woe

THE EMERALD SEA OF DEEP WOE. I cradled incredible crying moment when you just walked away still I remember. I had to surrender without any complain sinking in the emerald sea of deep woe. You left but I could neither believe nor accept the fact that you were going forever. How could I forget our so many sweet memories! Mercilessly you sailed in spree immersing me in turbulent sea of intense sorrow. Tingling passion arose when you came close. Romance rolled arousing aroma as if we were never to be apart. But territory of love was built in vain, relation coiled. Love terminated in inevitable pain. I gurgled trying to swallow the grief. That incredible crying moment whirled in vortex of dolor. . You left piercing heart of oyster. Secretion of nectar in drops of refused love now forming pearl of agony. My saline tears mingled in briny sea of despondence. 09/28/19 First Place Verses of Metaphors II Contest by Laura Loo

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Date: 10/9/2018 9:33:00 PM
This is a fantastic creation with words..a gem of a poem.loved it a lot
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/10/2018 1:15:00 PM
Thanks n Love
Date: 10/8/2018 3:19:00 AM
Big congratulations on your first position win.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/8/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thanks n Regards
Date: 10/7/2018 8:40:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Anisha.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/8/2018 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Line. Love

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