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The Emerald Sea of Deep Woe

Dissolving eternally echoes of love
Emerald reflections of deep green
Within streaming realities of time
Woes wounded within hungry darkness

Souls tangled upon inner destruction
Seas brewing blood in lost loves
Desires burning amidst sins of lust
Flaming hearts within green abyss

Emerald eyes sinking deep inside
Emotions flying thru celestial realms
Skies screaming with green sorrows
Jaded rainbows cascading and crying

Viridescent veins thru bodies filling
Waters deluging from olive clouds
Storming love of whirlpools' dying
Emerald seas of deepening woes.


...backward


Love of echoes eternally dissolving
Green deep of reflections Emerald
Time of realities streaming within
Darkness hungry within wounded woes

Destruction inner upon tangled souls
Loves lost in blood brewing Seas
Lust of sins amidst burning desires
Abyss green within hearts flaming

Inside deep, sinking eyes Emerald
Realms celestial thru flying emotions
Sorrows green, with screaming skies
Crying and cascading rainbows jaded

Filling bodies thru veins viridescent
Clouds olive from deluging waters
Dying whirlpools’ of love storming
Woes deepening of Seas Emerald.




...I call this type of poetry...a '360 Double Helix Reversible'
...can be done with rhyme, double rhyme, and free verse.

Picked 2.) The Emerald Sea of Deep Woe


Aug.04.2018
Verses of Metaphors II Poetry 
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

Music by:The Last Cry (V.3) 'Emerald Sea'


Placed 1st...[11'th of 21]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/7/2018 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations Warrior with those Wings!! Depth defines You. :) An amazing win indeed!! Love and Darkness. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/7/2018 9:00:00 PM
Superbly penned, WW. Exquisite imagery. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 9/5/2018 12:57:00 PM
A TERRIFIC POETIC CHALLENGE AND SO WELL DONE!
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:37:00 AM
my goodness, it's so difficult doing backwards word by word. YOu put a lot of work into this. wow!
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Date: 9/4/2018 10:02:00 PM
Your deep, dark thoughts are deeper than mine. You have created another world where shadows like to play. ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/4/2018 4:40:00 PM
Another amazing creation by your talented pen..well written, WW. Best for a with at the top of the podium.
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Date: 9/4/2018 4:03:00 PM
Nice form and amazing poem. This one reaches deep into the reader and touches them in the darkest places possible. Emotional speaking of course. Really cool my friend.
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Date: 9/4/2018 3:48:00 PM
I must say, you write brilliantly WW I may not understand everything you write. But the way you write makes it enjoyable to read...lol Excellent my friend...Love and light and peace!
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