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The Elixir of Life

From dark walls springs Ball of fire,illuminating The deeper parts to uttermost parts. Like the rising sun, re- kindles hope. Radiates afar off-from the heart's horizon. A wellspring from a brook- the soul nourishes. Sheathing sword of aging Unravels secrets of longetivity. The elixir of life,dew that quenches thirsty souls. A magnetic and contagious force repelling sadness from despaired minds. Can't be bought,bribed or stolen. If you need the elixir of life,learn from MONALISA!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2013 11:32:00 AM

Interesting work about a painting..I saw on a TV special how that the Monalisa is actually the male artist's portrait made to look like a woman..Of course, I did not know whether to believe that or not..I can understand the sly smile if that is the case..Ha!! Ha!! Thanks for stopping by.Sara

Rita Solis Radius

Date: 10/16/2013 2:33:00 AM

Hello Ifeanyi Bob! I want to look at the Mona Lisa glance everyday...and get your Elixir of Life!!! Good, Rita. .°

Lisa Mccall

Date: 10/15/2013 7:03:00 PM

U are really good. Very nicely done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2013 8:08:00 AM

this is a nice and sweet piece.... like MEDICINE on my wall... smiling ending.... xox...Linda

Skat A

Date: 10/13/2013 8:23:00 PM

Bob, love your write............. illuminating art.............SKAT

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/12/2013 11:49:00 PM

I'm marveling at this piece's form. Its subject-matter, the way it flows and ends are compelling."

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2013 10:07:00 AM

VEry interesting how you ended this. I need Mona Lisa!! I sure like this one.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/11/2013 11:24:00 PM

Very impressive write my dear friend Bob! If we need elixir of life, learn from Monaliza. Hmnnn... Kudos! This is a great write indeed and thank you so much for sharing. So love it and enjoyed. Now, I'm on my way to the poem you told me. Have a great weekend! love lots & big hugs, Leonora