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One fateful day, a lovelorn gentleman walks into a descending elevator with a lady with whom he finds very attractive. A once in a lifetime opportunity! A sliver of attraction seemed palpable from her end, too. Pleasantries were mumbled;, the ice cracked but didn't break. Their smiles were telling; an augury of what could've been. The elevator parts like Moses parted The Red Sea, and so did they. Out she went, walking far out of sight, but not out of the man's mind. What she said, and what he heard was a blur. He's regretful as the chance to reintroduce himself; perhaps ignite a spark of romance, has passed him by. Date written and posted: 06/27/2018

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Date: 7/21/2018 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done! Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/22/2018 12:59:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 7/21/2018 10:56:00 PM
Well penned, Edward. Missed opportunities...
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/22/2018 12:59:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 7/21/2018 1:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Story of fate well told. Well done!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/21/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan!:-)
Date: 7/19/2018 7:40:00 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/19/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise!
Date: 7/19/2018 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/19/2018 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so much for the placement, SO!:-) I'm humbled beyond words!

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