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The Elevator Encounter

One fateful day, 
a lovelorn gentleman
walks into 
a descending elevator 
with a lady 
with whom he finds 
very attractive. 
A once in a lifetime
opportunity!
A sliver of attraction 
seemed palpable 
from her end, too. 
Pleasantries 
were mumbled;, 
the ice cracked 
but didn't break. 
Their smiles 
were telling; 
an augury 
of what could've been.
The elevator parts 
like Moses parted 
The Red Sea, 
and so did they. 
Out she went, 
walking far 
out of sight, 
but not out 
of the man's mind.
What she said, 
and what he heard
was a blur.
He's regretful
as the chance  
to reintroduce
himself;
perhaps ignite
a spark of romance, 
has passed him by.

Date written and posted: 06/27/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done! Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Well penned, Edward. Missed opportunities...
Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thank you, Line!
Gentry Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. Story of fate well told. Well done!
Ibeh Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Thank you so much, Susan!:-)
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:40 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise!
One Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so much for the placement, SO!:-) I'm humbled beyond words!
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