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The Elephant In the Room

The elephant in the room went out for a drive, creating a scene in the scenic coastal town. Large as a barge, roaming the hills and the valleys. It was a bumpy road, mammoth and metastatic. It was like letting the bees out of the honey hive. Oh what the historic and stately place was shown. Not normally seen, the victim from the alleys. Causing accidents - it was briefly traumatic. The elephant’s ride was towed and does now sit out of sight. For his hide and tusk, it was quite a blow. The elephant in the room, it was his last shot. The affluent paid attention - for a time, it was quite dramatic. By droves, as tanker-ton came through, they came out to see the gray and stormy, with trunks and tusks, migrating. His travails and luggage, his need for snacks, a barge - the elephant in the room, they’d not allow a visit. 10/20/2022
end rhymes first two verses (drive, hive) verse 3 rhymes with first words in verse 2 (sit, it) with one exception. verse 4 rhymes with first words in verse 1 (see, the)
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Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 6:50 PM
The affluent paid attention LOL What a fun write Kim. Some continue to ignore him. Linda
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:14 PM
Blinders?
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 6:52 PM
It is funny how you can ignore the elephant! ;)
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 8:50 PM
I see that his knees weren't wrinkled. I guess Sir Elephant is not tying his gym shoes too tight anymore. lol. Interesting write, Kim!! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 9:27 AM
Thank you!
Kauffman Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 11:05 AM
Truth clothed in whimsy Kim. So often we are blinded wearing cement "tennies" of inertia when we encounter "the elephant in the room" that we would just prefer to ignore rather than deal with after all. Well done. Blessings of the season to you!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 1:01 PM
Blessings of the season to you to. Has been pretty chilly last couple of day. Thank you, Sam!
Kyser Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Sometimes, we find it easier to forget the elephant, but it never goes away. There's a name for when the end words from one stanza rhyme with the end words from subsequent stanzas, and I have completely forgotten it! Enjoyed the poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Thank you :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 7:16 AM
I only saw elephants in a zoo, No place for them in tiny Malta
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 8:49 AM
I hear London sells baby elephants in a store.
Forbes Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 6:15 AM
This is such a fun premise! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, Becky!
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