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The Elephant Bee

An elephant bee zoomed around my head I had maniacal thoughts, wished him dead. His buzz annoying Never enjoying Traitorous roses loved him, turning red.

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Date: 12/10/2020 6:43:00 PM
G’day Caren … did you feel the sting as well - thanks Caren - Lindsay
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2020 6:52:00 AM
Not that time but other times.
Date: 12/9/2020 6:45:00 PM
A love hate relationship!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:50:00 PM
Always.
Date: 12/9/2020 3:35:00 PM
Great descriptive poem. I don't like flying bugs :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:50:00 PM
I am tired of them myself.
Date: 12/9/2020 3:30:00 PM
Barklay's name just came to me (from my poem) I think his last name was Wright. Wish I knew how to know if he were alive or dead. Not good with finding things by google search!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:51:00 PM
Hahaha
Date: 12/9/2020 3:29:00 PM
oh how cute, the part about the roses!!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:51:00 PM
They would like him.
Date: 12/9/2020 3:14:00 PM
I found an 'elephant beetle' online. It's pretty scary looking, and it looks like it should be named an 'elephant bee?' Were you referring to that?! ~ Red Rooster
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:51:00 PM
I created my own elephant bee, not knowing there were elephant beetles at all! Thanks for the info.