The Element of Water

Sizzling day of summer heat,
Requisite hydration I really need,
No rain, no precipitation today,
Brilliant azure, no clouds this day,
I stood alone, poised, impermeable,
Damp crystallisation so feasible,
From this diving board I spring,
Invigorate me, I commence to sing,
But!! I forgot I'm way too old,
Man, this water's really cold!!!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Julie, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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April 17, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Julie ..
Scars Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Julie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Davey Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Had to include this poem in the list of winners with a big wide smile! Congratulations and thank you for entering!
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