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The Element of No Surprise

A lifetime search for this place of awesomeness and beauty springing forth a healing well pouring into my closed mind beckoning my heart to let go and believe. What’s hard to believe, I found truth of me in my own backyard hidden beneath the surface of dusty pieces of art, unframed; fragments of heaven had fallen, kissed my thirsty lips I came alive to live. A party of some sort tackled my emotions to the ground; there I discovered I already had all I ever needed. It was no surprise to my buried self, uprooted cheering for me, laying horizontal in my element in the company of a great revelation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/5/2015 8:51:00 PM
Brilliantly written Danetta! Marvelous phrasing and imagery highlight this superb work. '...kissed my thirsty lips I came alive to live, '...laying horizontal in my element in the company of a great revelation,' staggeringly beautiful! BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith
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Danetta Barney
Date: 12/5/2015 10:32:00 PM
To God be the glory. He keeps feeding my mind. Thank you so much for your nice comment. I had to read my poem again to make sure you commented on the right poem lol. Thanks again. :)

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