The Elasticity and Plasticity of My Private Space

If you care for me
As you claim you do
Let me see
If your feelings ring true

In words and in spirit
Deep enough to respect the elasticity and plasticity of the space
I own which with respect you should treat
Or else it’ll be a deja vu case

In which words claim one reality
While actions portray the opposite
Notion which depicts frailty
You ought to quit

In circumstances that jettison
Hollow claims teeming with lame excuses
For which a levity lesson
Shuts down the last sensitivity and sensibility sluices.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kithinji Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:53 PM
It seems like your first But certainly not your last. Well done and welcome to the Soup.
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