The Eggs

The hens have stopped laying
Six is all I can give
Send little Johnny over soon
Maybe if the hens live

I can give another six
That will make even twelve
Then on the morrow eight laid well
On the coming day delve


(This is poulter's measure with fun.  It was designed after what a poulter would 
do..Sometimes one would get a dozen eggs and then maybe fourteen. So lines with twelve 
syllables and then lines with fourteen.  This scheme is six, six, eight, six.  With the second 
and fourth rhyming.  The first two equal twelve and the second two equal fourteen.  I found 
this online at a site that had poetry information. I used delve to get a rhyme and it means 
searching for information.)
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Strand Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 12:42 AM
Nice twist Sara on this for.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & observations today.
Chachere Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Wow, this is nice, hens laying eggs. must be nice to be around. you do great posting poems almost everyday when your mind goes into space sometimes. tis' beautiful how much you will write no matter what.(:
Cheeseman Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 3:00 AM
Well laid out Sara Hmmm !! forgive the pun Daniel
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 12:08 PM
A great little poem and wonderful insight with your explanation.. an enjoyable read Sara..luv.. and thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry too..luv.. Linda-Marie
Pickett Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:29 AM
I copied your instructions.... I want to try this.... Good work my friend.... :JP]
Hill Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:07 AM
well done..interesting write Sara..TAH
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February 23, 2010 at 7:45 AM
Intresting reading this morning. Good one seems like a riddle to me. I am still guessing. Enjoyed reading your poem like always. Keepup the good work....................irma
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