Victor Buhagiar Poet Pantoum

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The Egg Spoon Race

The egg race began and oh what great fun,
Everyone chose his hollow spoon and ran.
Simple rules: don't bump into anyone.
Tigger used his tail, fell, out was one man.

Everyone chose his hollow spoon and ran.
Winnie the Pooh stumbled and was undone.
Tigger used his tail, fell, out was one man.
Piglet moved slowly and steadily won.

Winnie the Pooh stumbled and was undone.
Simple rules: don't bump into anyone.
Piglet moved slowly and steadily won.
The egg race began and oh what great fun.

13 July 2021
No. of photo 4
I use rhyme zone
Pantoum Rhyme 1 Poetry Contest
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Sam Kauffman August 17, 2021 at 10:39 AM Back with congratulations for your win Victor! So much fun!

Janice Canerdy August 16, 2021 at 1:50 PM A big CONGRATS on your win, Victor. Janice

Paula Goldsmith August 16, 2021 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on your win. What a cute write with Tigger and fiends. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Christuraj Alex August 16, 2021 at 9:19 AM Simple rules; don't bump into anyone. Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

JC Brul August 14, 2021 at 8:28 AM so cute and fun!Amazing rhyming poem that kids and "kids once" will surely enjoy! Congratulations!!

Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 8:36 PM Victor, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Judy Ball July 19, 2021 at 8:05 AM This was a really cute and fun read. Too often we forget while being an adult how to have innocent fun. We should reconnect with our inner child every now and then because sometimes being an adult can be a bit wearing on the nerves. Me, as I often say I am the world's oldest kid and it's fun. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB

Line Gauthier July 19, 2021 at 6:25 AM Absolutely delightful, Victor ~

Beryl Edmonds July 17, 2021 at 1:04 PM That’s such fun Victor, kiddies are sure to love it. Good luck for the contest… Belle

M. L. Kiser July 15, 2021 at 6:47 PM What a fun Pantoum; good luck in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 12:32 PM So…much…fun! A honey of a poem!

Sara Kendrick July 15, 2021 at 11:57 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. If I was little and I knew about Christopher Robin and Winnie The Pooh, I am sure I would have loved this rhyme. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Supraja Kannan July 14, 2021 at 9:08 PM A joyful read... Here, we play lemon and spoon game, exactly the same... Thanks for sharing this fun write... I enjoyed reading it and it reads like a winner to me...

Sam Kauffman July 14, 2021 at 2:09 PM So fun Victor. I love Winnie ther Pooh. My maiden name means honey bear. I feel a deep connection to Pooh. And egg races were such a hoot! Best wishes for the contest with this delight!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 14, 2021 at 1:17 PM - I remember the egg race ... it was fun ... a lovely and memorable poem, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos July 14, 2021 at 10:40 AM Victor this is such cute poem - and you chose my fave. nursery rhyme characters - LOOOOOOVE Winnie the Pooh! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Susan Lawrence July 14, 2021 at 9:42 AM Victor, I love this. Brings me back to the days of the egg races with my friends when I was a little girl ! Wonderful writing. All the best, Susan :) Memories !!

Mystic Rose Rose July 14, 2021 at 8:46 AM You are bringing me back such good memories. My dad used to make us play the egg and spoon game every Christmas, as entertainment. Some things are fun no matter what the era or time, Thank you dear Victor, for sharing, this, :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 14, 2021 at 8:36 AM What a delight! The merriment in these lines is contagious. You've done a great job crafting this fine pantoum. I am sure I see a winner. Blessings

Sotto Poet July 14, 2021 at 7:14 AM Victor, you struck the jackpot with the poem; it's a win for me, beautifully written with a delightfully hilarious setup. Good luck with the contest.

Vijay Pandit July 14, 2021 at 6:13 AM Great fun, Victor. Enjoyed the tenor of your poem. No doubt a winner!

Joanna Daniel July 14, 2021 at 2:24 AM A fun pantoum, Victor, thoroughly cherished :)

Tom Cunningham July 14, 2021 at 12:35 AM Well written Victor, you make pantoums look easy. Tom

Jan Allison July 14, 2021 at 12:34 AM what an entertaining poem Victor, i must check out the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Besma Riabi Dziri July 14, 2021 at 12:25 AM What a fun! So much enjoyed reading! So amazing the humorous feel in your poetry Victor! A well crafted rhyming pantoum worthy of a high placement! My warmest wishes for an outshining win in the contest.. My deepest regards and blessings.

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