The echoes of others

I walk among a ground where life is a trend.

Yet we don’t understand where’s our beginning and our end.

The burden to be like the rest.

We all stand shoulder to shoulder duplicate.

Not proving we are all imperfect.

The pressure to keep up.

But the feeling to be distinct.

I say to myself

“Am I really who I want to be”

“Or am I a carbon copy of other souls”

These patterns are confined in a box.

But do I have a key to unlock?
 
Proving ourselves to be different.

Is this really the craze we mimic?

Or is it an illusion we may just dismiss?

Time will tell it all.

But for now we just follow the ball.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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May 19, 2026 at 11:08 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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