The echo returns not
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while rain pummels
the beach at my feet
in the dark of night
silence reigns
it hovers
there's a dance
a tug of war
when hearts beat
to my ear drums
loud as loud can be
thump thump goes
my chest while
ghostly shadows
parade across fields
of poppies and lilies
look out across the seas
your eyes haunt me
on through the night
castaway whispers lost
to the crashing of waves
AP: 2nd place 2025
Submitted on March 13, 2025 for contest THE ECHO RETURNS NOT sponsored by UNSEEKING SEEKER - RANKED 3RD
Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2025
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