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while rain pummels the beach at my feet in the dark of night silence reigns it hovers there's a dance a tug of war when hearts beat to my ear drums loud as loud can be thump thump goes my chest while ghostly shadows parade across fields of poppies and lilies look out across the seas your eyes haunt me on through the night castaway whispers lost to the crashing of waves AP: 2nd place 2025 Submitted on March 13, 2025 for contest THE ECHO RETURNS NOT sponsored by UNSEEKING SEEKER - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 3/13/2025 8:20:00 PM
This is so rich with imagery, all complementary to the content. Nothing wasted. Love it! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2025 5:36:00 AM
Thanks you so much, Gershon ~

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