the echo returns not

steeped in an ocean of time
slow motion’s recurrence reverberated 
concentric circles rippled the tide
moored its anchor 
in illusions of safety

yet the harbour was far away
a mere tug at a distant shore

once more it sent out its signal
as he finally snapped ready to drown

never again said the mermaid
leave the sinister hobgoblins
and straddle Atlantis with me

secured at last he acknowledged 
that letting go of the past
meant freedom and safety
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:02 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Neumann Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 2:11 AM
Thank you Paula. Have a wonderful day. Kindest wishes, Kai
Vaso Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:30 AM
Beautiful poetry!
Neumann Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Arthur. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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