The Echo

I loosen from inside 
And falling are my guts apart 
One by one like bolts and nuts 
After having been gripped 
And grabbed tight from outside 
Feel like a package 
Wrapped in a red ribbon 
Inside ribs break 
Yet I could not break way out 
To make me free I dip into water 
Upon the beach I roll 
But nothing has been changed 
At the end I rough up my spirit only 
And slowly fading away like a sweet song 
Only hope I see 
One day I may find a hill and collide 
And come to you all echoing back strong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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