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The Ebb and Flow In Joy Setting

Reflections across the water draws Gracious on one pathway of light shimmering crystals speak In a frozen state of mind held breathless where listening to the ocean waves crawling kiss Capturing the seas of imagination as the sun begins setting crowned by the clouds as she dips down behind the horizon Paradise becomes lost in the realm of a golden glowing circle twilight begins to speak of the night's return breath of an ocean whispering Over and back kissing the sands treading gently a seagull cries into this distant echo

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Date: 10/27/2017 8:30:00 PM
Hello Liam Mcdaid, as I was reading your poem, it made me feel like i was near the ocean, listening to the waves coming to shore. This is a beautiful written poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:15:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet passionate n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekIn His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 9/18/2017 4:43:00 PM
Liam, your imaginary and structure is flawless. Once again your words are priceless...beautiful poem.
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