The Earth Trembled

Sin doubled and Earth trembled ! I am reminded of the last days when Heaven sends down destruction on all those steeped in sin.... ! A powerful write Victor !

Dramatic, indeed! Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/powerful~~story/write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............

- A small but powerful poem, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Very nicely penned Victor, best wishes

A great entry... I have never tried this form but you excelled ... I loved reading it...

The earth has trembled many times over the years, the day of reckoning may be near I fear. Great write Victor… Hugs, Belle

Hi Victor, What a good entry for the contest theme. Good rhymes and content- Alexis

This poem provides food for thought, Victor...Well done...Delice

I agree with Andrea, Victor, deep poem in few lines:)

well written verse, trembling days of earth

reminds me of last days on earth and what people might do. Very interesting one, Victor.

I can see earth trembling at all our sins, dear friend, lately we needs God's contrition more then ever, :)

Very good write! As the sin dissembles, the earth trembles!

You have created a vivid portrayal of what judgement day might be like, Victor. The picture with the angry red skies makes a good companion to this verse. Fine writing! Good luck in the contest. Hugs.

You painted brilliantly everything that happened after the earth trembled. This has to win BIG, Victor.

Some horrible times are coming upon the earth up to the rapture of the church then after the rapture it will get much worse and the Antichrist takes control. I see everyday more and more signs that it is going to happen. It says in the Bible that there is going to be an earthquake that is going to shake the whole earth. Can you imagine what that is going to be like, I can't. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

This time is coming, perhaps not in our time, but in the time of a few more generations, stunning poem and great imagery, your wording is flawless. Best wishes, because that day is terrifying.

When that time comes many will turn to God asking forgiveness but it will be too late, they've had their reward. Tom

Yes, the not to far into the future here, Victor, great poetry.