Amanda Moore Poet Tetractys

The Earth Speaks To the Moon and Sun

Shine
Moon and
carve a path
illuminate
for me my earthly journey’s destiny
for when your sister Sun awakes once more
she’ll warm my back
from sunrise 
till she
sleeps
 AgMoore© 07/2011

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Gert W. Knop December 27, 2011 at 3:28 AM Lovely write Amanda! Enjoyed the read this morning!

Moses Ombuge September 1, 2011 at 5:15 AM Lovely and beautiful words, am enjoying every bit.

Bl Devnath August 5, 2011 at 11:08 AM Nice write, words are adorned beautifully. Thanks for your comment on my poetry. bl Amanda Moore August 5, 2011 at 6:35 PM Thanks bl = )

Chiquitachiamaka Baity July 31, 2011 at 10:01 PM This is a beautiful tetractys Amanda. I enjoyed reading your poetry today!!!! Amanda Moore August 2, 2011 at 9:16 PM Thank you very much Chiquita!

Black Eyed Susan July 31, 2011 at 9:04 PM beautiful. this has a great flow to it :) Amanda Moore July 31, 2011 at 9:33 PM Thanks Susan glad you liked it!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 28, 2011 at 8:51 AM As I am enjoying reading your very creative writing today I would like to thank you for sharing it with us Amanda. Hoping you have a very inspiration filled day with loads of joy and laughter. Love, Carol Amanda Moore July 28, 2011 at 11:49 PM Carol if I get That lucky I will let you know =)

Jack Ross Jr. July 27, 2011 at 4:09 PM very lovely verse......Gpd bless.....Old Jack Amanda Moore July 27, 2011 at 10:42 PM Hi Jack,thank you so much!