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Pop and I many years after our shared 'plantin' season

You may read the companion memoir vignette at poetrysoup.com/short_stories/plantin_season_13579

THE EARTH BETWEEN US

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First, the shovel bites dirt~ a clean incision where grass pretended the world was always this green. Dad’s hands, knuckled like roots, twist the spade deeper. He doesn’t speak, but I know this is the language of a man who trusts the ground. We kneel, pressing seeds into dark, damp pockets~ each one a buried secret waiting to unravel. His fingers, thick as carrots, brush mine by accident. The sun stretches our shadows long across the turned soil, two bent figures stitching the earth back together, one row at a time. By dusk, we are dirty in ways that won’t wash off. The garden doesn’t thank us yet, but the love and gratitude between Dad and me is soft and growing.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 11:50 AM
beautiful tribute ~
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:12 PM
Poignant, gorgeous poem, Sara.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 5:52 PM
A heartwarming write, glad for the share.
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