The Eagle

THE EAGLE

From sheer Jurassic precipice he soared
Surveyed the land for gifts it might afford

Across the broad flat valley’s rich domain
With viewpoint high, low altitude disdain

In languid circling track approaching nigh
The eagle now came level eye with eye

He seemed to nod to one perceived as peer
Acknowledged coexistence without fear 

His self assurance of a privileged strain
In higher echelon of victual chain

No predator to make threat to his being
Where flight has no concomitance with fleeing 

We two shared aspect regal and remote 
Above a distant world seeming to denote

A subject to be seen with cool detachment
From other lives set on their own enactment

The matchstick men in matchbox cars below
Proceed in patterns conjunct, fluent flow

As if directed by a master plan
The pieces moved as by an unseen hand 

Yet inside every box there is a mind
That makes decisions well informed or blind

The myriads of choices of direction
Have source within those living souls’ election

I marvel at this concept: life centricity
The thought of such abundance, prolificity

Of individual life forms each conferred in
The ability, its intentions to determine

Some say we’re mere machines therefore robotic
Or otherwise controlled by force hypnotic

And some aver a plan: divine intention
By God who makes judgemental intervention

I claim no knowledge, or insight on this score
Perhaps one day I’ll know with sureness more

‘Til then prefer this chosen metaphor
- In freedom I would with the eagle soar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/5/2018 3:03:00 PM
Beautiful, Geoffrey. Grandiose.
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Date: 1/5/2018 1:36:00 PM
great poem dear Geoffrey! :) congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/5/2018 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Geoffrey - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/5/2018 2:45:00 PM
Many thanks and good wishes, Gregory
Date: 1/4/2018 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations for your wonderful win Geoffrey with this amazing write. Intriguing and thought-provoking.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/5/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Susan
Date: 1/3/2018 11:23:00 AM
Enjoyed this thoughtful write, words to ponder, congrats on a fine placement Geoffrey!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/5/2018 2:28:00 PM
Your opinion is much appreciated. Thanks John
Date: 11/30/2017 7:00:00 AM
I hope the air is less smoggy for you Geoffrey? When we were there last year it was so bad that they were actually asking people to stay indoors, as it was causing asthma. Goeffrey another wonderful write of yours which I really enjoyed....Maria
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/7/2017 4:38:00 AM
Unfortunately, you are right about the air, Maria. My asthma always takes a turn for the worst here (it’s where I am now). If the police here spent more time enforcing the law rather than penalising honest traders and collecting bribes, they might get many of the worst polluters off the road.Thnks for your response
Date: 11/29/2017 3:52:00 AM
Thank you for the valued response as always dear Cecilia.
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