The Dry Umbrella

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Beloved princes: Boys become Buddhist novices in Thailand

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*Image of Boys Become Buddhist Novices by The Asian Age. The Dry Umbrella I must recreate myself, foremost, strides hold best, I feel energized, totally wandering by my lonesome, amongst nature I did stray, abruptly, I felt perturbed, I forgot to pray, I just realized, rapidly the sky, reignited, my umbrella too, not ok. 2021 August 15

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/16/2021 4:50:00 PM

Great verse, William, In the Rainbow of Loving, a wonderful treasure awaits him, my friend. Blessings and kindest wishes.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 5:18:00 PM

Your visit and words, Lasaad, are like the boy pictured where the best is always worth the wait my friend, Aloha!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/16/2021 12:15:00 PM

Hello William kekaula, the boy has something to look forward to. Aloha Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/16/2021 3:50:00 PM

Hello William, yes there is a wonderful blessing waiting for him. Thank you for the Light of love William.Blessings to you my friend. Aloha!! Darlene.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 12:37:00 PM

A wondrous blessing awaits for him, Darlene, Light of Love my friend, Aloha!