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The Drunken Pen

My pen remains drunken yet does not stumble A functioning lifeaholic somehow agressively humble Mixed drink of choice reality with a shot of enlightenment Often it speaks through unslurred words it seeks out excitement Exposure to these street games but it holds its composure Still unsure it may be claimed so searching for closure Ability to regret lost somewhere within the ink It cant even object no matter how strong the drink It has multiple epiphanies Like instruments in a symphony A rejoice that will not be muzzled Choices that leave some puzzled It goes beyond tunnel vision and exposes facades It sees beyond our own dimension feeds on applause My pen will never sober up I call it a lush It patiently takes sips of life theres no need to rush. Sha'ntez Jefferson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/14/2012 4:07:00 PM
I likes this. It is awesome written. I love good poetry. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 10/20/2012 3:38:00 PM
Thank you all for stopping by to congratulate much appreciated and thank you joann for my placement I read and enjoyed them all strong group of poets on the soup
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Date: 10/20/2012 12:07:00 PM
Congrats Shantez...an awesome win! One love, Joy Wells
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:23:00 PM
Shantez, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD
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Date: 10/19/2012 6:55:00 PM
Hey Sha'ntez - Big Congrats to you on a great win for the 'Drunken Pen' contest......hugs - Shaz
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Date: 10/19/2012 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Sha'ntez. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2012 3:44:00 AM
Hey nice Drunken pen yourself! thanks for feedback on my poem Sha'ntez....glad u stopped by - Shaz
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Date: 10/8/2012 10:22:00 PM
Hi, Sha'ntez, i like how your pen, stays under control, and i love the second ending line" my pen will never sober up, i call it a lush" ... now that made me smile.. . Thank you for this awesome poem. Goodnight :-)~ PD
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