The Drunkard

The Drunkard staggered into a bar And slurred that he just wrecked his car He added, "Wha th' hell, Isle... zit 'ere ...az-spell..." Then he sang while he banged his guitar!

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/14/2023 12:54:00 PM

Then he sang while he banged his guitar ahah! What a brilliant storyline in your fun limerick! Creative and very imaginative! Loved reading this

Mona Ebel
Date: 10/15/2023 7:31:00 AM

Limericks are fun indeed! Thank you for your positive remarks! I have read some of your poetry, and you are very good. I could learn a lot from you, and would love more of your feedback or challenges to help me grow as a poet.