The Drink of Fools

Darkness
Drowning in that lie
That liquid that betrays
Color of the amber sun
Whispered to be the Gods drink

Too potent for mortal blood
Consumed by Spartan Violence
Shattering glass
Wallowing in misery
Darkness

Control was never grasped
Only an illusion of the polluted mind
No oracle would praise 
or promise drink
Until the end of the days

Consumed by that image
Wavering before bloodshot eyes
Hephaestus slamming his hammer 
Into the sides of a mortals cranium

Bleary judgement
Bruised knuckles on a hand
The amber lies of the God's entertainment
One sip that brings instead of light
Sweet darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bordner Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 12:01 AM
Oh, you possess some ancient power my mysterious friend - you truly feel,and understand what you compose - I love the historical,mythical element in this composition Jay! I will be a devotee to your labor here - you make risk appear enchanting - I suppose that darkness may lead to the greater lights - J.A.B. %
Mclain Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 7:18 AM
great imagery. certain lines just jump out at you such as "amber sun" and "Only an illusion of the polluted mind". I don't know where you got that, but I love it.
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