The Drink

You corrode your being
With evil that serves no purpose
How do you propose to do this and keep us
Is it demons, darkness, depression or drear
It's hard to sit by and watch in fear
You choose to hurt yourself or is it me
Clink
Clink
Clink
Just one more please
Life I guess is too much for you
But remember I am a part of you too

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/19/2015 9:44:00 AM

Excellent pen Angie! So much truth to what you say in your piece, my dear friend. Enjoyed! A 7 from me! I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D."

Angie Mills
Date: 2/19/2015 10:25:00 AM

Thank you for your words! Very much appreciated Dorian. Have a wonderful day :)