The Drifters...

One by one they drift away...
And now there`s nothing left to say...
Now they all go their seperate ways... 
Will they reunite one day...?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 9:20 AM
i like this alot its got good flow. though where im from drifters are what we call the run-a-ways....people who go from one place to another, sometimes even after their 18. thats basically the drifters to us...again i really enjoyed this peice you have alot of tallent =] good luck xo Rain
Fraser Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Kool piece Priscilla>>James
Canady Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 12:42 PM
I like the flow of this one and the short story is complete... Good Write... MoonBee
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 4:26 PM
perhaps....like dandilion seeds! with all their little projections...Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Priscilla. Love, Carol
Lopez Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 9:29 AM
excellent write ...and they will meet again! :-)
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 5:35 AM
Good question phrased as a poem. Keep writing. Sara
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