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The Dried Grass

Moonlight over The frozen ground Reveals dried grass Whose movements Give away A breath of wind As it whispers On its way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2013 7:46:00 AM
Very nice... Congratulations... Terry
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Date: 3/18/2013 6:48:00 PM
Daniel Congratulations :-) with your nice and wonderful winning free verse poem~ Always & Forever* PD
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Date: 12/16/2011 9:02:00 AM
great imagery, I can feel the whispering wind!Nice poem Daniel. Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2011 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:53:00 AM
Very nice Daniel. Congratulations
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Date: 12/15/2011 6:39:00 AM
so dreamy lovely imagery! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/15/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 5:04:00 AM
Daniel, Did you notice that the first 3 lines could make a powerful haiku? Powerful images of nature. Congrats on this win. All the best. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/15/2011 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations and happy forthcoming holidays x
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