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The Dress You Chose

How lovely you look in that perfect dress you chose rosy lips, in pout lit smile likened to love's dawn that would be heart's best day won were it my hand that held yours

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2020 1:16:00 AM

beautiful but sad at the same time. I especially love the line 'lit smile likened to love's dawn' :-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2020 8:46:00 AM

Did she accept the invitation? I suspect the dress may not have been worn for very long. ;0)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/4/2020 11:43:00 AM

Richard, Thanks for dropping by. Some of the comments struck a sadder note. As he watched her walk away hand in hand with someone else. Is the glass half full or half empty(?) -Richard

Robert Kinard

Date: 1/2/2020 7:01:00 AM

Wow, very romantic and smooth. I like it. Richard you have a way with words. Nicely done.

Tara Dawn

Date: 12/27/2019 7:13:00 PM

Love lost gives some of the best material. Amazing!

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2019 11:49:00 AM

Lovely, Richard. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/25/2019 5:48:00 AM

Gorgeous!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/24/2019 5:15:00 AM

That is beautiful and so sad at the same time. I hope that life is still good for you. Kind wishes, Kai

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2019 12:26:00 PM

oh if only... sometimes we can only admire from a distance..

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/4/2020 12:27:00 PM

Silent One, Thank you. I think you've hit on the essence of this Tanka turned FV (had too many lines so had to change). "[ Your comment would make a better title too. Happy Saturday. -Richard

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/21/2019 11:16:00 PM

This is lovely.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/4/2020 11:49:00 AM

Juliet, Thank you for this comment. I really enjoyed your Lay poem 'Your Coffee Locks'. -Richard

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/20/2019 11:30:00 AM

Aw, beautifully penned.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/4/2020 11:51:00 AM

M.L., Thanks for stopping by. Happy New Year. -Richard

Hello There

Date: 12/19/2019 12:37:00 AM

So beautifully sad, Richard. But lovely just the same.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/18/2019 10:40:00 AM

A perfect write in every way! And a FAV )) Panagiota xxx

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/18/2019 7:50:00 AM

Ahh Richard this was a sweet little poem!;)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/4/2020 12:28:00 PM

Thanks Brenda. Sweet of you to say that. Happy Saturday. -Richard

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/18/2019 4:53:00 AM

That last line with it's let-down disappointment was perfect! Many thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M