The Dreariest Shore

On my awaking,
March's bright sun begins to rise...
dazing the blue sea,
to let the shrills of seagulls 
cheer up the dreariest shore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 10:46 PM
I really like this, Andrew. One of your best tanka poems I think!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:15 AM
LOVE IT!!!
Arteaga Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 10:08 PM
like the imagery, ever see a seagull fly still above the sand? it's very cool and pleasant feeling to watch which is what I felt with this poem. :)
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