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The Dreariest Shore

On my awaking, March's bright sun begins to rise... dazing the blue sea, to let the shrills of seagulls cheer up the dreariest shore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/17/2011 10:46:00 PM
I really like this, Andrew. One of your best tanka poems I think!!
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:15:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:08:00 PM
like the imagery, ever see a seagull fly still above the sand? it's very cool and pleasant feeling to watch which is what I felt with this poem. :)
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