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The Dreams

In dreams of the dark night, I hear my heart swiftly beating But in the light of day my dreams which become to me more bright And in time's passing, my dreams become goals that need completing. In dreams of the dark night_ My heart racing_weeping_unfinished dreams have reached their height In my deep sweet dreams at night; how I long for just one meeting But in the day the truth arrays, and night's dreams take their flight Oh! What a dream, poetic dream, my love someday meeting. All we now have is our secret night time_sweet dream's delight. In dreams our hearts come together and ignite with greetings_ In dreams of the dark night Inspired by : Suzette Crous Contest: Roundel And By : Russell Sivey Contest: Dream And A Dream Written by : Edgar Allen Poe Written: Saturday, May 04, 2013 Form: Roundel which is not listed

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Date: 5/11/2013 5:44:00 PM
Sara I adore this poem. An excellent write. Congratulations on the win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/10/2013 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations Sara, very beautiful. The flow is amazing. Have a nice weekend. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 5/10/2013 9:44:00 PM
congrats on your win.take care
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Date: 5/6/2013 3:50:00 PM
A tremendous job. So VERY well done. Bravo!
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Date: 5/6/2013 10:25:00 AM
sara, i felt the dream cycle - soothing but elusive - in your write. i just yesterday finished a biography of edgar a poe. he died penniless and tormented. thanks for indulging in my write; happy you were surprised as that was a goal. randy
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:14:00 PM
I was absorbed into this one Sara...
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Date: 5/5/2013 3:08:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, Sara. I love it! Have a great day :)
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Date: 5/5/2013 3:06:00 PM
lovely write, my friend - hope you win both contests
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Date: 5/5/2013 6:35:00 AM
dramatically scribed with such deep feeling all throughout, sara... beautiful!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/4/2013 11:08:00 PM
beautiful piece Sara
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Date: 5/4/2013 10:24:00 PM
Excellent. A good poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:32:00 PM
This is a very good poem. Sara, thank you for sharing...I enjoy Edgar Allen Poe's dream poem...xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/4/2013 6:38:00 PM
This inspires me. J W has made you laugh a million times . Google him .
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