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The Dreamer's Shadow

My shadow wears clean underwear a freshly cleaned frock and shoes that are smart and it knows the order of things its hair is like black spools of raw silk my shadow is a dreamer dancing, prancing and dreaming of things above ground and under the sun and follows me ‘til the day is done. Comments: Never be afraid of your shadow :-)

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Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 8/28/2008 11:44:00 AM

This is a wonderful write of something we take for granted - you have written a reflection of yourself in describing the shadow's personality!

Sara Lokken

Date: 8/6/2008 2:13:00 PM

A very pictureque and cute write that makes on smile. I remember playing with my shadow---I should probably pay more attention now. You inspired me, lol. Regards, Sara:)

Date: 8/5/2008 7:24:00 PM

I had to chuckle at your second line. Nice use of imagery. Though presented in a light fashion, there is a lot to think about in this poem. Nice parting comment. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/3/2008 11:50:00 AM

Well written, thought provoking and a delight to read. Sounds like a good recipe to me. Well done. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/1/2008 2:32:00 PM

This is seriously beautiful and delightful for both kids and adults. I love it! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/1/2008 12:16:00 PM

Thats right - While I was in prison I wrote a lot of poems about the shadow dancers that live in the halls - nothing to fear - God Bless