Adell Foster Poet Verse

The Dreamer's Shadow

My shadow wears
clean underwear 
a freshly cleaned frock 
and shoes that are smart 
and it knows
the order of things
its hair is like
black spools of raw silk 
my shadow is a dreamer 
dancing, prancing and dreaming 
of things above ground and under the sun 
and follows me ‘til the day is done. 


Comments:
Never be afraid of your shadow :-)

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Valerie Bellefleur August 28, 2008 at 11:44 AM This is a wonderful write of something we take for granted - you have written a reflection of yourself in describing the shadow's personality!

Sara Lokken August 6, 2008 at 2:13 PM A very pictureque and cute write that makes on smile. I remember playing with my shadow---I should probably pay more attention now. You inspired me, lol. Regards, Sara:)

August 5, 2008 at 7:24 PM I had to chuckle at your second line. Nice use of imagery. Though presented in a light fashion, there is a lot to think about in this poem. Nice parting comment. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen

Heidie Buys August 3, 2008 at 11:50 AM Well written, thought provoking and a delight to read. Sounds like a good recipe to me. Well done. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter August 1, 2008 at 2:32 PM This is seriously beautiful and delightful for both kids and adults. I love it! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan August 1, 2008 at 12:16 PM Thats right - While I was in prison I wrote a lot of poems about the shadow dancers that live in the halls - nothing to fear - God Bless