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The Dreamer's Journey

The price awaits It leads to the dream But the journey to the price is torture. For now, I can only hope. Hope beautifies the dream And shapes me to be better. The fight is internal, But the price will be paid. Because the dream is my crush BY BOATEMAH EUNICE

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/6/2024 5:59:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Darren White

Date: 3/11/2017 2:59:00 AM

This is a wonderful metaphor. And I understand it so well and can relate to it. You have written this beautifully. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)

B.J. Fitz

Date: 3/10/2017 10:18:00 PM

This is really quite beautiful while so subtle