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The Dream Days

Dreamy days of summer, violet petals on the wind,
Apple green forest music, too bad it will soon end,
Petals cover wild walkways, summer's just leaving,
Trees are weeping beauty, summer is just grieving.

Tangelo sun is arising, full of destiny and purpose,
Like fading seasons, always managing to resurface.
Sunlit carpet of petals, late in a pretty garden year,
Like puffy clouds, always going, until others appear.
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Tor Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 9:43 PM
Lovely to read and lovely to see Evelyn...
Buehler Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 9:33 AM
That is so nice to know. Thank you.
DiMino Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 12:13 PM
"Like fading seasons, always managing to resurface." Absolutely love that! Love the entire write. Thank you for sharing.
Buehler Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 4:36 PM
You are more than welcome. I appreciate your warm remarks very much, Joe. :)
Poet Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Dear Evelyn, what a lovely artwork you have created with the use of words. The poetry you wrote is as lovely as a spring flower.
Buehler Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 11:44 AM
Thank you for the joy of your inspiring words, my friend. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 1:20 AM
Your poem is as pretty as a garden year.
Buehler Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 11:43 AM
Your lovely compliment is much appreciated. :)
Salehi Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 10:58 PM
Dear Evelyn what a nice painting you have done with words.
Buehler Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 11:41 AM
Thank you very much, Pashang. :)
Roper Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 8:28 PM
Evelyn, love all the imagery. Winter is coming and taking color with it.
Buehler Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 10:02 PM
Winter also has its charms. Thank you so much. :)
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