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The Dream

The black knight shines when I close my eyes The mist rolls round a strange new disguise A faraway land the faces so real A thousand mystic sunsets glaring off my steel A maiden calls out tied to a tree An offering for the beast who dwells beneath the sea The warrior stands alone His armour shines of gold Weilding the sword of Vengance handed down from old The challenge was met,the maiden set free But it was only a dream Inspired by you for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/7/2012 8:46:00 AM
I love this dream, a worrior saves the maiden. Great Job!
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:19:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Johnny. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 3:52:00 AM
Johnny it is a wery good poem, I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/6/2012 10:14:00 PM
Reads like you are describing Perseus and Andromeda here. Your entry displays good descriptiveness and rhyming. However, this work is much too long to be considered a crystalline poem. A crystalline is usually only a one-line poem with no more than seventeen syllables total. This is more like a "rhyme" poem.
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