The Dream

In my dream, the sun was a god,
The moon smiles and gave me a nod,
The stars turned to shining dust,
Which scraped off of metal as I watched it rust.

Then a fire started out of a spark,
The obscure dream went all dark,
I woke up looking at the wall,
The real world felt so small!


*Not sure what kind of poem this is... help?*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 7:11 AM
"Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 13, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Viola, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 5:43 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Viola. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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