Constance La France Poet Verse

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The Dream

  I dream
           a dreamy dream
      of a garden 
   oh, such a lush green place
       with a flowing stream
  and up above are drifting
            clouds like ice cream
  and a gang of floating bees
        and butterflies fill the air
     and a hummingbird with 
  glistening feathers caresses
 a flower in my dreamy
                 dream . . . 

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March 24, 2021


Poetry/Verse/the dream
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1340-362-24
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the contest, All Yours (Mar 24)
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/23/2021

First Place

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Sam Kauffman March 26, 2021 at 12:38 PM I like your dreamy dream, Constance especially your "gang of bees and butterflies!" Thank you for inviting all of us to share your vision. Congratulations on your win. Constance La France March 26, 2021 at 4:49 PM Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations and the nice comment, grateful _Constance

Caren Krutsinger March 25, 2021 at 12:35 AM Every single verse is terrific. I particularly enjoyed " clouds like ice cream and a gang of floating bees" Congrats on the win Constance. Constance La France March 25, 2021 at 2:09 AM Caren, thanks for the great comment and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate _Constance

Carol Mitra March 24, 2021 at 6:37 PM Beautiful dream....Congrats on your win dear, much love :) Constance La France March 25, 2021 at 2:09 AM Carol, thanks for the compliment and congrats, love _Constance

Carolyn Devonshire March 24, 2021 at 3:53 PM If only all our dreams could be so beautiful! Love all the spring activity among the flora and fauna. Wish I could explore it with you. (So glad your package arrived.) Hugs, Carolyn Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 4:39 PM Carolyn, thanks for the the lovely comment and compliment to my dreamy dream, hugs _Constance

Gordon Mcconnell March 24, 2021 at 3:11 PM Lovely piece Constance, full of great imagery and insightful thought . Blessings always,Gordon Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 4:39 PM Gordon, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

Kim Merryman March 24, 2021 at 1:25 PM Beautiful, vivid, imagery, Constance! congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 4:40 PM Kim, thanks for the compliment and congrats _Constance

Judy Ball March 24, 2021 at 9:48 AM Lovely Constance. Beautiful imagery. Love it. Hope it wins. God Bless, JB Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 4:40 PM Judy, thanks for the compliment on my poem, grateful _Constance