For 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 23 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney
I A dragon, platypus, and unicorn, drank in a bar and soon locked horns. The air was tense - would it come to blows? The unicorn spoke, "Which one knows a truth which he dares to conceal? One of us is... disgracefully real." II "It's a sad state of affairs - is it not," said the dragon, "when one of us is caught". Sweat broke out in little beads on the platypus forehead of evil deeds. In a fate worse than he had feared, the platypus simply disappeared.
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