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This is based on some fact and some half-truths and some non-truth..
The home in which we live is on a hillside going to a creek.The person who built it well insulated it with no air conditioning..He may have had window units but if so took them with him..

It was like living in hades it was so hot here for a long time..Also there wasn't much shade..The trees have grown to give us a shady lot but it is still hot here..

. There's an insulated home in the south Where lived one and only old dragon mouth From his lips insults spout A.C. now heat blocks out The old dragon mouth still a cottonmouth Contest: Single Limerick Contest: Horrible Bosses Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire *Note on about this poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2014 9:10:00 PM
Sara This is a cute and creative piece of writing. You captured the way some people really are in life. Nice job Thanks for the sweet and kind comment on my Cartoon World poem.
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Date: 8/20/2011 2:53:00 PM
Good job here my friend. Good luck in the contest. Should be a winner. :) God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:53:00 AM
LOL, witty piece on old Dragon mouth : )
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:31:00 AM
well constructed and your lines are greatly expressing some bosses as dragon mouth and snakes too..good luck in the contest Sara..
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Date: 8/19/2011 12:25:00 AM
Very nice Sara.....enjoyed this Limerick....Best wishes.
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Date: 8/18/2011 10:41:00 PM
thanks for the note. An interesting poem and I liked that line about dragon mouth and cotton mouth!
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Date: 8/18/2011 10:37:00 PM
Sara loved this one, a very creative piece of work.
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Date: 8/18/2011 1:18:00 PM
so descritoive and so put together, sara... i wonder if this dragon guy is real... must be really bossy!.. winning luck with huggs, nette
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