The Dove Tree

A flock of Christmas doves
carried a turquoise veil
through a white winter sky
and found a willow tree
weeping and alone 
in the cold of a December day

The veil was pinned in the sky
and twenty five doves
alit in the bare branches 
so the tree was no longer alone
as it listened to the song
of the doves in the chilled morning air..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Goff Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 4:10 AM
holy cow Valerie! this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever seen! fav, fav, fav!!! thanks for reading my poems too! and sending me to this exceptional poem!!! Happy Holidays to you and yours! james marshall goff
Degenhardt Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 8:21 AM
This is amazing and how beautiful a site to behold as the doves take their way to this lonely tree. The words flow so easily and the detail is terrific. Michael
Reynolds Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 7:42 AM
Wow, this is magnificent. The doves with the blue veil - amazing! As for your comments on my bi-polar poem, my husband has this as well, and boy can I relate to those mood swings well, as it is always hard to watch one you love so torn apart and tortured. bless you for sharing, love, Kristin
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December 29, 2008 at 7:18 AM
Wonderful imagery and language so well expressed... well done Valerie! Best wishes, Keith
Winter Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 6:41 AM
Valerie, this is too lovely. A beautiful visual that inspires deeply. All the best to you in the new year. love, Shar
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December 28, 2008 at 9:16 AM
This one sings, Valerie!! So beautiful the scene! ~ Love, Carrie
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