Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Senryu

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- the Doubt Suffocates Me -

the fear inside me

                       ripped - of thoughts that ask questions

                                    -     dressed in armor - safe








28/01/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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1st place in the contest

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Peter W Iversen February 22, 2020 at 10:18 AM Gratulerer! Nicely done - Peter Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2020 at 11:14 AM - Takk, Peter :) - klem // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2020 at 6:46 AM Nice! Congrats, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 12:32 PM - Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf February 5, 2020 at 1:04 PM Very neatly themed and imaged/imagined, Anne-Lise. Congrats on your top-drawer win in the contest too! Smiles, Gershon Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2020 at 1:56 PM - Thanks for the congrats and your visit, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Marc February 5, 2020 at 12:19 PM Great senryu ~ Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 12:32 PM - Thank you very much, P.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith February 5, 2020 at 5:30 AM Excellent Anne-Lise, congrats. :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 12:31 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman February 4, 2020 at 10:51 PM Anne-Lise - Powerful images! Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 12:30 PM - Many thanks Sam, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sam Kauffman February 4, 2020 at 10:52 PM Opps! Please forgive me! Congratulations Sunshine!

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2020 at 3:15 PM waY to go, sunshine. Congratulations Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 12:30 PM - Andrea, many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy February 4, 2020 at 12:36 AM Congratulations, Anne on your first place win. Nice thoughts. Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 12:29 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas February 4, 2020 at 12:00 AM How strong our armors are.. that is the difference.. Congrats on your great win in the contest Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 12:28 PM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, appreciate it a lot Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2020 at 3:46 PM I really like this one. Hope you score big with it. Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2020 at 3:14 AM - Andrea, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 29, 2020 at 3:45 PM The armor of faith my friend takes away all fear. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2020 at 3:14 AM - Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

D.W. Rodgers January 29, 2020 at 9:09 AM An elegant Senyru and definitely awesome armour. Good luck in the contest. Dave Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 9:39 AM - Thank you very much, Dave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael January 29, 2020 at 8:48 AM Protected...just need a little space...A wonderful message here...to be noted. Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 9:39 AM - Thank you very much, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann January 29, 2020 at 6:04 AM Descartes - I doubt, therefor I am. Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 6:58 AM - Thanks, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 29, 2020 at 4:49 AM Impenetrable is the armor of your faith my dearest , friend Anne-Lise. Great writing. Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 5:23 AM - Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 29, 2020 at 1:45 AM No fear left to feel, safe in armor dressed! very clever, love and hugs, dear Anne-Lise, Blessings, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 3:10 AM - Like hiding behind a mask - Thank you very much, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2020 at 9:30 PM I like this and along with the pic...so is this the armor of God or just a general reference? Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 3:05 AM - ... you think of Amor's arrows, Kim ... "dressed in armor" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham January 28, 2020 at 2:29 PM Always that little niggle to hold you back, well written Anne and good luck. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 3:07 AM - Always ... - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green January 28, 2020 at 2:00 PM Wear that armor proudly my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2020 at 2:12 PM - It's heavy, Chris :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit January 28, 2020 at 1:47 PM Powerful words, even without the photo--excellent write, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2020 at 1:59 PM - Thanks, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)