The Double Edged Sword

This poem brings into sharp relief what, in my opinion, is the ridiculousness of the human race. Haha, I wish I had a more intelligent or uplifting comment to make. I share your concern though.

So true, how sad. Your poem is so powerful Sara. It is sad isn't it, just the worst, God created the human race, blessed with so much in creation, and the goodness of God is depleted in mass by the misuse and sorrow causing pollution, sickness, poison and death.

The title certainly fits your words. Faving this dynamic poem...powerful stuff here!

This is a serious issue you have given your thought to. The clearing of land for digging out minerals is going to destroy the eco system of the earth, causing serious hazards to man and creatures. The sad thing is that the minerals thus mined are used for making weapons of war. Well thought out dear Sara.👍

"What will be the end?" We all know how it may end but few in power are doing much about it. Nevertheless, the likes of us must keep on highlighting the danger with every opportunity like you've done with this well constructed poem.

I enjoyed reading your powerful write. A wonderful picture here. Have a blessed day writing away.............

You've crafted a thought-provoking poem that touches on important themes about the consequences of our actions, Sara. It's impressive how you've managed to convey such a complex message with a few powerful lines.

The end will consume us all! Sigh! That's the stark reality which is going to unfold if the destruction by humans continues in the same way.. which disappointingly will be true..it really shakes my heart and also makes my think how also native people suffer for the gain of the powerful ones, they are dislocation and abandoned. All because of hatred. If only people knew the language of love! What a profound and soul-stirring piece dear Sara ~very introspective ❤️‍🩹❤️‍🔥🥀 Keep writing and shining ⭐💫