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The Door Is Closing

Haven't finished what I've started I'm running low on fuel So much left unaccomplished Father Time, you're too cruel I feel the door closing My life nears its end Dare my work I set aside My relationships to mend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/9/2020 4:16:00 PM
I believe in you. You have this!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2020 10:04:00 PM
Yup. Time to mend those relationships. ~ Gershon
Date: 3/7/2020 11:18:00 PM
Interesting and well penned poem, Gershon. Time waits for no man, it seems. Best of wishes. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2020 12:50:00 PM
You're certainly right about that: Tim waits for no man (or woman either). :) gw
Date: 3/6/2020 8:16:00 AM
Relationships we can leave untended while we work but which is greater?!
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Date: 3/6/2020 12:40:00 PM
Gotta fined that elusive work-life balance somehow... :) gw
Date: 3/6/2020 3:18:00 AM
I'm hoping that when my door shuts I won't know anything about it. I hope it closes quickly, must oil those hinges for that to happen. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2020 12:39:00 PM
Love your comment! ~ The Tin Man
Date: 3/5/2020 11:08:00 PM
Food for thought, well penned.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2020 12:38:00 PM
Don't want to leave my devoted readers hungry, you know! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 3/5/2020 10:10:00 PM
I hear you, Gershon. The pressure is on.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/5/2020 10:14:00 PM
Interesting that you are the first to leave a comment, Line. I really did have you in mind when I wrote this, as I sense this theme weighs on you too lately. ~ Still striving -- for what is the alternative? :) gw

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