Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

The Door Is Closing

Haven't finished what I've started
  I'm running low on fuel
So much left unaccomplished
  Father Time, you're too cruel 

I feel the door closing
  My life nears its end
Dare my work I set aside
  My relationships to mend

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Caren Krutsinger March 9, 2020 at 4:16 PM I believe in you. You have this! Gershon Wolf March 9, 2020 at 10:04 PM Yup. Time to mend those relationships. ~ Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 7, 2020 at 11:18 PM Interesting and well penned poem, Gershon. Time waits for no man, it seems. Best of wishes. :) Gershon Wolf March 8, 2020 at 12:50 PM You're certainly right about that: Tim waits for no man (or woman either). :) gw

Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2020 at 8:16 AM Relationships we can leave untended while we work but which is greater?! Gershon Wolf March 6, 2020 at 12:40 PM Gotta fined that elusive work-life balance somehow... :) gw

Tom Cunningham March 6, 2020 at 3:18 AM I'm hoping that when my door shuts I won't know anything about it. I hope it closes quickly, must oil those hinges for that to happen. Tom Gershon Wolf March 6, 2020 at 12:39 PM Love your comment! ~ The Tin Man

M. L. Kiser March 5, 2020 at 11:08 PM Food for thought, well penned. Gershon Wolf March 6, 2020 at 12:38 PM Don't want to leave my devoted readers hungry, you know! Cheers, Gershon

Line Gauthier March 5, 2020 at 10:10 PM I hear you, Gershon. The pressure is on. Gershon Wolf March 5, 2020 at 10:14 PM Interesting that you are the first to leave a comment, Line. I really did have you in mind when I wrote this, as I sense this theme weighs on you too lately. ~ Still striving -- for what is the alternative? :) gw