The Door Creaked Open

I was hurrying by the spooky house when the door creaked open.
Hopin' it was just my imagination, I hesitated a moment too long
for suddenly a creepy voice from inside beckoned me to enter...
I froze when a waft of cold air hit me and I heard words of a song...

Come inside, and we'll have a bit of lunch and a nice spot of tea
I shook my head in total disbelief and told my feet to move along
but they seemed to have a will of their own and didn't listen to me
What am I to do to escape the siren's call?  To her I don't belong.

Just then it was I heard a murder of crows, flying low overhead
Another omen that I never should have chosen to walk this way
But then one flew close enough to me, and this is what it said,
"Leave your shoes behind and run...You'll be dead if you stay,"

I gulped and gasped and managed to get my feet to obey
I could feel the pulse of heart beating double time in my chest
The crows kept circling above while darkness was filling the day
I'll not become the victim of the house and be laid to rest!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 7, 2026 at 1:34 PM
Wow Lin u had me engrossed in fear of the moment with you 👀🐦‍⬛😱 felt tension ~was running with you. Another genre your a sheer genius with pen 🖊 n ink ✍️ hugzzz 🫂 n luv ❤️
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