The Door

The Door In each days passing the door closes... a little more... and a little more... and a little more... Soon there will be no way out... Or in... deborah burch©10.31.17

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/9/2018 11:05:00 AM

Very meaningful. But maybe the hinges are creaking and the door succumbs...

James Swartz

Date: 11/22/2017 9:04:00 PM

Very insightful and meaningful. Too bad there is not a way to prop the Door open. Great poem!

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/23/2017 11:05:00 AM

Thank you James!! There in lies the conundrum...the "catch-22"...ironic, isn't it ;) Hugggs, deb.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/21/2017 6:30:00 AM

Wow! What door is that? I wonder... wonderfully written, Cap'n:)

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/21/2017 12:38:00 PM

;) awww. Thanks Jo!! You know I didn't realize or think of "Holdor" until after reading it posted and giving it this title!! Lol!! But it fits!! Good eye!! Big Hugggs!! Cap'n

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/19/2017 2:18:00 PM

Excellent potent pen!

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/19/2017 3:48:00 PM

Maureen, your kindness is so much appreciated!! Thank you!! Big Hugggs. Deb