The Door

You're all I think about
Your eyes are like the oceans depth
So beautiful and blue I can see myself 
I know it's wrong for me to think of you that way 
And I know it's wrong that you can hurt or light my day
But every time you look directly in my eyes 
I just want to make you mines
Open the door and I hope it's you 
I open the door to see it's not true 
Oh why do I always let you inside? 
When all you do is tear me up and make me cry 
But I open up the door
I open up the door 
I open up the door for you
Every time 
Everything I see makes me think of you
From the cauliflower stalk to Bill and Ted part 2
I miss you with all my heart and soul 
I miss you even though I know you don't 
But every time someone's mentions your name 
I realize my feelings have stayed the same 
Open the door and I hope it's you 
I open the door to see it's not true 
Oh Why do I always let you inside?
When all you do is tear me up and make me cry
But I open up the door 
I open up the door 
I open up the door for you
Every time 
One day I'm gonna close it
One day you'll knock and I won't open 
That day is coming soon 
I closed the door 
Even though it was you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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October 28, 2014 at 1:31 AM
You're good at repetition, and how it all built up to the last line. The message I got from this is that you can only take advantage of someone's kindness for so long. Pretty soon, when that door closes it'll finally hit him just what he has been missing out on. Another wonderfully written poem!
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November 2, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Awww thank you!!! It's repiticious mostly because they're songs I've written. That started off as poetry and I created a tune in my head for it. But it's true. Everyone has a limit. And in here I reached it.
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