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A location, is different than a place. There are many locations, but There are only two places. One is with you, The other is without. I have traveled to the place that is you. I have paused frequently at that space Below your left ear At the base of your neck, It is the space where my lips Join your skin Pressing my ear against your neck To hear your heartbeat quicken. Against you there, With commingled hair, My breath flows down your breast Merging with your own Wandering back As a warmth against my cheek. Here, there lies a door Where I have left This earth before To enter Heaven.

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Date: 1/14/2021 1:24:00 AM
Beautiful sensitive, sensual writing!
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Date: 1/13/2021 7:02:00 AM
Vernon, a beauty! Love it! So romantic and sensuous.
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