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The dolly mama — heartbreak after heartbreak. mama’s babies became their babies. hers was buried in a tiny coffin, flowers in hole. he had a name covered with dirt. the other names, she holds as a bouquet, petals, spilling like tears down her face. drops muddy the ground sprouting up other people’s kids and a goddaughter, she loves to pieces. identifying with the struggle of self, she encourages and wraps her sensitive arms around youth, not always pretty, sometimes uncouth, but she holds hope in her heart for those itty bitties. her first attraction was to the stars with their huge hair, sparkling teeth, glamorous clothes, big personalities— she let hers shine right out front, being well endowed. her crowd drew attention but her loving nature grew and grew. she’s a dolly through and through. judgment belongs to God. somehow i think Jesus would draw her close, hug it out. 3/25/2021

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Date: 3/26/2021 5:56:00 AM
- Truth ... lovely written, Kim :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/25/2021 10:41:00 AM
This is a beauty for sure. I love it... a lot of hope within a heart for sure. Love and prayers, God bless you, Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2021 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, Gina!
Date: 3/25/2021 7:16:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Kim. Judgement does belong to God and I'm sure Jesus will hug it out.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!

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