Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

The Divine Move-W

Middle of life where there is the start line
And miles to go to the finish line
With so many questions and answers.
Heaven smiles when god embraces

Suddenly with one divine move
He sends his smile through images to prove.
Do not you worry, Folks. It's fine
All your dear ones you lost are safe.

=================================

Tenth Placement
Contest: The Divine Move

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tahera Mannan July 31, 2010 at 3:24 AM Dear Dr. Ram today i needed inspiration and your poem did it. Thanks for everything.

James Fraser July 12, 2010 at 12:37 PM Dr, Ram - there is a calming message in your words, beautifully written. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2010 at 11:28 AM Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 11, 2010 at 11:23 PM A very inspiring write, Dr. Ram, enjoyed how your last 2 lines are also so comforting in :) - congrats! --nikko :)

Francine Roberts July 11, 2010 at 9:41 PM lovely piece

Lynette Chachere July 11, 2010 at 9:40 PM this is a very sweet write. to know your loved ones are safe is a great thing. hope you have a great night! ~Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2010 at 5:21 PM Hey, a really good poem you got from that picture, Dr. Ram. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman July 11, 2010 at 3:52 PM Congratulations, Dr Ram on your poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire July 11, 2010 at 12:05 PM I really like this poem, Dr. Ram, and it would have placed higher if not for a grammar problem in the last line. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2010 at 7:53 AM How encouraging .. a write of delight Dr. Ram.. good luck if for the contest.. wonderful words of insight .. from your gifted mind and pen this Sunday.. appreciate your kind word on Mind Power .. now posted Love Found A Way.. to lift spirits today.. with luv..

Carrie Richards July 11, 2010 at 7:20 AM Emotional, comforting, and a spiritual poem. I liked this message very much! Nicely done! ~ love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick July 11, 2010 at 6:38 AM Great divine move..Keep the inspirational pen flowing..Sara